What’s Missing From This Ad?

This appeared in our local paper, The Oregonian, a few days ago:

outdoor ad

Here’s the text:

Our name has changed, but we haven’t. We’re still the same place we always were. We’re still the place with the most experience and the same great service. We’ve got 15 stores across the Northwest, and they all share our unbeatable knowledge of our customers’ needs. The name may be new, but we’re still your local experts.

There’s a crucial piece of information missing — information without which the core message makes no sense at all. Care to tell me what it is?

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What Are You Famous For?

Last week I had a conversation with the owner of a home improvement company on the East Coast. The business has been open for more than fifty years, and until fairly recently it concentrated exclusively on replacement windows. Name and location are removed here.

They have expanded into other areas of home remodeling, and changed their name from _____ Replacement Window Company to ________ Windows, Doors And More. In spite of this, the owner told me, the vast majority of new customers are still coming to him for windows. He wants to increase his non-window business, and asked what I thought of an advertising campaign in which he listed all the things his company can do — kitchens, bathrooms, master bedrooms, etc.

I advised against it — told him that the most successful campaigns focused on one thing. It was my opinion that the fastest way to introduce his non-window services to new customers was to advertise windows.

My reasoning: after fifty years, the business is famous, and trusted, for windows. That’s they’re “point of entry” — the thing new clients ask about first. Because of the equity he’s built, they will bring in more new customers, faster, by going after more window business. If their house has windows, it’ll have a kitchen… and a bathroom. Start the relatioinship with windows, and they’ll be back for other projects.

It wasn’t a great conversation. My guess is that when we hung up the phone, he still felt that a window campaign would close off other opportunities, while I continue to believe it will open them.

So it was with great interest that I read Tom Ray’s essay on the restaurant business in the Achievers Circle newsletter this week. Ray is the Executive Vice President of Jim Doyle & Associates, and has spent years traveling the country, working with business owners on their marketing plans.

Ray described a meeting he had with the owner of a casual dining restaurant. The establishment was famous for burgers, but the owner wanted to sell more steaks.

I call [this] the “Michael Jordan syndrome.” You’ve got the greatest basketball player who ever lived, and he wants to try his hand at baseball!? Just dunk it!

So what did I do? I brought back a strategy to sell more steaks… by advertising burgers!

The campaign Ray designed capitalized on the restaurant’s reputation for the Best Burger in Town, and advertised a specialty burger. The specialty burger is now the #2 seller on the menu, the campaign has been running for several months, and new traffic is way up.

In his case, burgers are his point of entry. If you want to sell more steaks, advertise burgers, get new faces in the door, give them a great experience, and tell them to come back for steaks. Like my colleague, Don “the Guru of Ads” Fitzgibbons, says, “If you want to sell parrots, advertise parakeets! Everyone who buys a $700 parrot bought a $29 parakeet first.”

For the East Coast home improvement guy, window are his point of entry — his “burger”, or  “parakeet”. He’ll get more kitchen and bathroom jobs by advertising windows.

What’s your point of entry?

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Brochure Copy Word Choice: A Nice Example

While sitting in the reception room of a local med spa (a sales call, I assure you), I picked up a brochure for a product called Radiesse.

wrinkle correction

The key word here is “correction”.

They could have said “filler”  (in fact, they do, in the inside copy). Or “smoother”. Or “eraser”. But “correction” gives the process a completely different implication.

You correct an injustice. You correct poor vision.

“Corrected” changes wrinkles from a natural result of the aging process to a medical problem. And using Radiesse is converted, in the target’s mind, from an expensive exercise in vanity to a necessary treatment of a health condition.

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It’s All About the Story

Over the last 14 years, I’ve met with hundreds of business owners. It’s my job to learn as much as I can about the business, figure out what’s special about it, and effectively communicate that story to customers and prospects.

A couple of guys named Rhett and Link somehow crossed paths with TDM Auto Sales in High Point, North Carolina. The business itself appears to be nothing out of the ordinary — it’s just another used car lot in a small town. But Rhett and Link found something special: Rudy, a Cuban immigrant with a thick accent. Rudy’s last name is never given. He may or may not be the owner.

But Rudy has a story — he was once a gynecologist in Cuba — and a sense of humor.

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Don Fitzgibbons, the Guru of Ads, likes to say that there’s only one way to tell a good ad from a bad one — find out if it worked. So I’m asking:

If I have any readers in the High Point, NC area, please advise — is this commercial driving genuine car-buying traffic to TDM Auto Sales?

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What Business Are You Really In?

From Dan Kennedy’s recent book No B.S. Marketing to the Affluent:

An excellent lesson in selling a gift of any kind comes from the mail-order jeweler Karets and Facets, which target-markets to the mass affluent. A page of outstanding sales copy from the company’s catalog… is headlined “Guaranteed Gasp or Your Money Refunded.” This company understands that it isn’t in the jewelry business, but in the gasp business.

I’m in the attention-rental business. How about you?

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